First RTO ad for nice property under AFS, Help please!!

  • MichaelDunbar

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    Joined: 19 Feb 2010
    From: Calgary, AB

    Hi Rein folks.  Wondering if you could critique my ad for a property we've just acquired under AFS.  To tell you the truth this is an extremely nice property with all the bells and whistles, and we are a little bit over our heads in marketing to more upper class RTO clientele.  We are most likely appealing to a torontonian family who can't afford to purchase in Toronto, but is looking for a place to buy, maybe with some credit issues.  Or on the flip side, we are appealing to people in and around the Barrie area.  The house is 339,000 purchase price and we're hoping to get a minimum down payment of 20k.  We are aiming to get a minimum of $2500/month lease payments.  In addition with any ad help I can get, can you advise me as to what medium of advertisement you have gotten the best results from?  eg... paid ad on FSBO barrie, Kijiji, newspaper ads with a prerecorded voice message?   any help would be greatly appreciated.  Ok , have at 'er

    Own your upscale home now!  It’s that Easy with vendor Financing.  Poor credit?  No problem

    Welcome to your beautiful new house that you can proudly call home in the north end of Barrie.  Save money on rent and start owning your impressive home that you can dazzle your friends with.  This is an upper scale home, complete with all the fine details and custom upgrades guaranteed to allow you to enjoy the finer moments in your life.  Your large (3000 sq.ft), 4 bedroom and 2.5 bathroom decadent house boasts beautiful hardwood and slate flooring.  Granite countertops, coupled with a double sided glass fireplace to warm you up on your couch in the family room or while enjoying a glass of wine in the kitchen, serve to add overall comfort of to the main level.  A grand 2-story entryway is the first thing you’ll lay eyes on when you come inside, accented by lovely wooden handrail European spiraling staircase.  Read the newspaper and enjoy your cup of coffee in the morning from your breakfast bar.  There are so many lovely things about your new home, I’m having trouble deciding which ones may be the most important to you.  One thing I do know; If you see it, you’ll fall in love with it.  An incomplete list of the main features:

    Benefits:

    • Close to schools, shopping , entertainment and bus routes
    • Move in ready, with modern designer colours and fresh decor
    • Only blocks away from Hwy 400 for easy commuting

    Features:

    • Flex room immediately at the front of the house offset by double French doors and large bright bay window.  Can be used as an office or living room…use your imagination!
    • Elevated Deck immediately off the kitchen with bright sliding glass door
    • 4 bedrooms with a massive  master bedroom.
    • Ensuite bath complete with luxury soaker tub and separate shower stall, done in tasteful ceramic tile flooring and matching tub surround
    • Stainless steel appliances in kitchen included
    • Quality dark hardwood flooring, Ceramic and custom slate flooring thoughout
    • Breakfast bar/ All Granite countertops
    • Beautiful European style spiral staircase with wooden handrail accenting a grand 2-story entrance
    • Large receiving vestibule with lovely glass screen doors for increased privacy
    • Double sided Fireplace can be appreciated from the kitchen or family room
    • Double sink in main 5 piece bath upstairs
    • A main floor Den can be used as office or kids playroom
    • Powder room on main floor
    • Huge partially framed basement can be used for gaming room, home theatre room or even a granny suite for extra income.

    These are definitely not all the amazing features of your home.  You must come and see it for yourself soon as it won’t last long

    Our rent to own program is a proven system that takes into account many factors the banks don’t.  Even if the banks don’t want to deal with you, If you have a steady job and downpayment we want to talk to you and see if you’ll be the proud owner of this beautiful home.   Discover the joys of rent to own and the results it can bring you and your family.  Protect your wealth and create your future by becoming a home owner. 

    We are open to accepting people with all credit ratings.  Don’t disqualify yourself, yours may be the perfect family ready to move into this home.   Don’t waste any time acting on your new home, or somebody else may have the privilege of calling it theirs.  Call us now and find out if this can be yours!

    What you need to do:  Call 705-585-4844, if what you hear doesn’t impress you, then you are not the right owners for this home. Once impressed, please feel free to contact Martin 705-641-1777.  Or email martin@definitiveinvestments.ca

    Don’t take too long, this house WILL be gone before you know it.

     

    Mike Dunbar | Financed Homes Inc. | Rent to Own Specialist |
    Earn Double Digit Annual Return On Your Investment
    With Our Turn-Key and Joint Venture Rent to Own Opportunities

    Office: 403.220.0008 l Fax: 705.585.4808
    1334, 12th Ave. SW, Suite #207, Calgary Ab.  T3C 3R9
    www.financedhomes.ca

    P.S. We have a steady stream of properly screened Tenant-Buyers awaiting your
    investment to help them become home owners!



                
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