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My wife and I recently bought a vacant duplex in Ottawa and have listed it on Kijiji and Craigslist for the past two weeks.
We`ve been surprised by the lack of response to the ad (we`re getting quite a few views of the ad, but relatively few inquiries), and are hoping some of you can critique our ad to provide some ideas.
FYI, the price of the apartment is par with going rates for downtown Ottawa. The ad is live on Kijiji here
Here`s the ad:
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** Beautiful 3-bdrm between Glebe and Dow`s Lake **
Beautiful, turn-of-the-century, 3-bedroom apartment for rent. Very bright apartment. In a duplex that is located between the Glebe and Dow`s lake.
Great location - walk to work downtown, or take a quick bus ride to Carleton U. Restaurants, shops, Dow`s Lake and the Canal are all walking distance.
Features of this apartment include:
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Any ideas? I`m also wondering if the photos in the ad aren`t tempting enough.
Thanks a lot,
Moe
We`ve been surprised by the lack of response to the ad (we`re getting quite a few views of the ad, but relatively few inquiries), and are hoping some of you can critique our ad to provide some ideas.
FYI, the price of the apartment is par with going rates for downtown Ottawa. The ad is live on Kijiji here
Here`s the ad:
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** Beautiful 3-bdrm between Glebe and Dow`s Lake **
Beautiful, turn-of-the-century, 3-bedroom apartment for rent. Very bright apartment. In a duplex that is located between the Glebe and Dow`s lake.
Great location - walk to work downtown, or take a quick bus ride to Carleton U. Restaurants, shops, Dow`s Lake and the Canal are all walking distance.
Features of this apartment include:
- Three good-sized bedrooms
- Huge living room with large windows and fireplace
- New hardwood floors
- High ceilings Freshly painted walls Enclosed porch off kitchen Washer and dryer Parking for one car
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Any ideas? I`m also wondering if the photos in the ad aren`t tempting enough.
Thanks a lot,
Moe